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The story is pretty good, but I don't understand how Rinoa using her sorceress powers during the exam is "cheating". I mean it doesn't really make sense, because she has those powers available to use--they're a part of her, right? So why shouldn't she use t I I mean if only a few who take the exam get to be SeeDs and it has to be the few best, then wouldn't Rinoa's sorceress powers make her the best (if she passed)? So if Rinoa using her powers is cheating than couldn't it be cheating say, if someone has a natural gift for wielding a gunblade and then *gasp* OMG uses a gunblade during the exam because their good at it? I don't know, I just didn't get that part =/

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Very interesting first chapter. Looks like a fun plot to write out, at least the little devil Rinoa's. :-D I always knew she wa so so sweet and innocent. I have to say though, that Niora and Naori are gonna be easially mixed up, if they're supposed to be very different characters. And where's the sex!?

Well, I enjoyed this and I think you're off to a promising start. I did figure out the name thing right away and I got a kick out of it - I thought it was very clever. It's interesting to see a dark Rinoa for a change. I'll be looking forward to you next chapter.