rate_review Reviews

I have sympathy for anyone who reads this garbage. It's not even the plot; it's the pairing and the way you display the characters. Sephiroth giving ANYONE a pet name is so OOC. You, my dear, need to stop torturing our favorite villain. He's not some love-smitten romantic who suddenly falls for some schmuck of a shemale and decides that he wants to go home with him because it's the only way he can get redemption for his sins, and he wants to live happily ever after. You were clearly on crack when you wrote this. The dialogue reads like some poor mixture of "Days of Our Lives" and "Highlander". The Watchers? Oh, that's so fucking original. To make him suddenly human was something that you should have really just not attempted. You haven't the skills or the knowledge of either character to go about mutilating them like this and think you are going to get away with it. I suggest that you take a long walk off a short cliff, because for all of your troubles, the only thing you've seem to come up with is a way to induce vomiting.

In other words: you suck.

This ranks as not only the best fanfic I have ever laid eyes on, but one of the best stories I have ever read. I thank you so much for writing this beautiful piece. It made me laugh, it made me cry, and it warmed my heart. I cannot thank you enough.

Hi, wow all i can say is that this was the best sephy/kuja story i have ever read. i'm a big fan of your kingdom hearts fan fics as well. keep up the awsome work.

Oh that was... *sniff sob* so beautiful. please write a sequel !

This fic has to be the most delicious fic I've read like almost ever. You were descriptive and very clear with your words and I thought u did a stupendulyawsomegooddy job at charecterizing the charecters, especially sephiroophs personality dissorder. The only sad thing I have to say about your story is that its over :(. If I had a puter and a scanner I would give you one of the picture that I drew of them two. Their one of my favorite pairings period, well them and Sora and squall and sora and riku and Karasu and Kurama and Satoshi and Disuke and .....okay im rambling thanx for treating my mind to such a great story and um hope to read from ya more. :) (:

I love you........Omg your story Pwned me! Its so realistic. you had me on the edge of my seat gurl!
-write more please. i love you! Noodles!

Man, I haven`t enjoyed a story this long since I've read Cybele's "If you're prepared. The story caught me since the very first chapter,the sex is varied and frequent enough, and the end is just the knid I love, dramaic to the very end, but happy.
Tou really dd a good job with this one. I'm looking forward to read more of your stories!!


Keep going!

SEQUAL!!!! Please make a sequal about Sephiroth and Kuja and their adventures in Gaia(or other worlds) PLEEEEZZZZ!!!!

Wow. I just... wow.

I should probably start by saying that I pretty much NEVER read crossovers (simply because they have a tendancy to either not make sense or... just be bad in general) but I really adore Kuja-sama, so I started reading this... I didn'tn ren realize it was 28 chapters long until I was about 10 chapters into it.

It was just so... gods. I want to say 'beautiful' but that doesn't seem right. Then again, I had someone tell me, recently, that one of my fics was beautiful and it definitely made me grin. I can't get over how insanely real the whole thing felt. Lol. Which is funny, considering the context.

The idea was so original. Unlike anything I've ever read before. And the dynamics between Sephiroth and Kuja were just amazing. I almost cried when I got to the end, even though it was happy. ^_^'

Thank you so much for writing this, and sharing it. I hope you keep writing wonderful fics like this.

That was so beautiful. ;______;