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June 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM
So this was a good story, I liked the premise. It has a good build up for possible future content. There is a lot that could be done with an elixir like this which seems to control the mind so strongly. It's a fun idea.
Just a recommendation though, a good spell checking or proof reading of this story would help a lot. There's more than a few errors here that make the story hard to read through.
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when will you continue this story, i like to read chapter when everyone gather, should be great. orgy is great
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very hot. Glad to see some Squall/Rinoa on this site!
Please keep writing!
Please keep writing!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How very average.
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes. Apparently the database corruption had hit midway of a tag, and that's why it wasn't visible. Thanks for pointing it out, maybe I should update the other corrupted chapters too.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is great and i'm glad you're continuing it, but chapter 3 is not there
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I was hoping this story wasn't in the wastebin! I'm terribly looking forward to more...so pleeeease keep it up.
Also, the third chapter doesn't appear on aff.n for whatever reason.
Also, the third chapter doesn't appear on aff.n for whatever reason.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to be in that orgy!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was..umm..interisting...
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what? a non-yaoi story in the FF8 category? i knew i hadn't been getting enough sleep lately... seriously, I really enjoyed it. i can't wait to read more