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by Cynthia

person Linkin Fantasy
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like how mature you are about Rinoa. I know how others bash her when they could juat ignore that little feature that was their somewhat relationship- you hit it exactly, she forced herself and he was pushed. But, that being said I love this! well done, and I love Squall and Irvine that doesn't come off as forced, you have got the goods my friend. I only have chapter 3 and 4 left! It sucks that that's all. Do more some day, we need more Squall/Irvine that isn't just silly fucking games or bad make-out sessions, or one with someone else and the other is pining. I just want some good cozy reading. So thank you. Wish my joy cheeks luck getting through the end. Adios!
person Ikippiki
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just as it was getting really interesting... you say "The End"... kind of disapointing. But I still liked it.
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful! There aren't many Squall/Irvine fics out there, so this was a pleasure to find. Wonderful story, characterizations... and THANK YOU for not making Rinoa out to be a mega-bitch like most FF8 yaoi writers tend to do.

I'd write more, but I am in a hurry to read the sequel. ^-^