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by Cynthia

person Kage
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep goin! More please!
person darksquall (NSI)
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mm. Gotta love a Squall and Irvine pairing. 'specially with virginal squall. He's so nummy.

It's well written, and the sexy scenes are cool, but the one thing that always makes me take a step back and think hold on here, is the spelling Cum. It cheapens it a little. Other than that, it's great! Looking forward to more!
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
!!!!

This an awesome fic. I absolutely adored the ending scene in Chapter Four. Can't wait to see this continue.