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for Heartbreak and Second Love

by Redrum

person Elfwench
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Are you going to continue? Please do! I'd love to kick both Zell and Rinoa right in the ass!
person Raven\'s Light
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update??? please!?!?!? i love it! need moree~!!!!
person DragonAngel
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*.* oh my god... i love it!! is there more!? is there!? is there!? is theeeeere!?!? please let there be more!!! UPDATE SOON I BEG YOU!!!
person Shini Kurai
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me: aww... kawaii...
Aero: i don think Seif and Squall would appreciate that comment...
Squall: damn right!
me: well it's true. you n Seif are jus so... um... oh sorry Squally but i can't think of a word other than kawaii.
Squall: *growls*
Seifer: eheh. come one Squall, lets go out. *takes Squall's hand and drags him away*
Squall: *blinks*
Aero: hmm... those two are strange
me: yeah well they're still kawaii.
Aero: thats true.
me: anyways. i like this story.
Aero: me too. so basically ths means-
me: to update.
Aero: soon!
me: exactally ^_~ keep up the good work!
person neophyte
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! ^O^ Wonderful job!! WONDERFUL!!
person Ze
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that's a great story, but the way you made chappie 7, you could end it there, but I really hope ya don't.
person Shan
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo, get in there Seify! Yeah, I know Squall's got issues about what happened and all, but it's about time Seifer got rewarded for his sweet behaviour. And Zell should get squished by an anvil.