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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Learn to format for christ's sake
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Might I suggest the services of a competent beta reader? Also, another play through of the game/watching of the movie to get a better grasp of what is in character and what is out of character.
This would be an excellent stab at a first fic, however I would recommend taking to heart the adage of all writers: Show, don't tell.
This would be an excellent stab at a first fic, however I would recommend taking to heart the adage of all writers: Show, don't tell.
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August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is wonderful, but Tensing should be Tseng. Keep up the excellent work.
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh Vincent came back!
I wonder what will happen next?!
I wonder what will happen next?!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. ;.; that was a very sweet story.
I am not the biggest reno and Vincent fan but nice how you set up this pairing.
I am not the biggest reno and Vincent fan but nice how you set up this pairing.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, I love this story!!!!!! Your a better writer than me. Really, your a good writer. I'll read more of your work. It'll be fun. Say hi, to Sephy for me. *Huggs Steph* Bye E me me
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BAHAHAHA! What an interesting pair they are! .....but somehow...it works! I really liked your second chapter when CLoud bet Reno....hahahah that was great! ^__^
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww poor vincent. Well at least he gets to go to a house and not a cheap inn. Hehehehehe
I have no rrom as I put Cid into worse sexual situations.
I have no rrom as I put Cid into worse sexual situations.
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ended it there?! I wanna see what happens next! It was just getting good too.
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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LOL Poor Vincent! But I bet Reno is great in bed. Hehehehehe
LOL Poor Vincent! But I bet Reno is great in bed. Hehehehehe