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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Boy, does she get around! A very nice idea and a well written story. The pissing part lessens the quality, though.
I myself did not think that the Land of Monsters would quicken growth, but instead that time passed quicker there. Also, while Rydia is one of my favorite characters, it's the adult Rydia, so I would've preferred passing on the teenage Rydia and letting a grown up Rydia do the deed. There were nice bits of humor in the story though, Ramuh's scene especially was funny. Nice parody of that old geezer. I liked Odin's scene too - for tig cig cumshot. I'd always like to see more messy cumshot scenes in good fics.
I myself did not think that the Land of Monsters would quicken growth, but instead that time passed quicker there. Also, while Rydia is one of my favorite characters, it's the adult Rydia, so I would've preferred passing on the teenage Rydia and letting a grown up Rydia do the deed. There were nice bits of humor in the story though, Ramuh's scene especially was funny. Nice parody of that old geezer. I liked Odin's scene too - for tig cig cumshot. I'd always like to see more messy cumshot scenes in good fics.