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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looking good! Great build up. decisions, decisions. Quickie in the elevator, or something more set up yet better possiblities for lasting the night. can/will seifer & Zell open to each other? and how much "help" is selphie willing to give them? eagerly awaiting your next chapter (so soon as they fix the site, of course). Purrrrrrrrrrr!
schedule
March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY! WHERE'S CHAPTER THREE MAN! this needs to be continued because it's REALLLL HIP! =D
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. can't wait for more!
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You need to check some of your grammar and some spelling mistakes, but other than that I think it was wonderfully done. ^^ I can't wait to read more.
Holla,
~Joie
Holla,
~Joie
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee...I like! hmmm....Hard to think about where you should go from here....beach scene? Maybe? Anyway, great work!
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So great! Can't wait to read more!
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more. This sounds like it has real potential! hee hee. SxZ is one of my favorites. although IxZ isn't bad either. *shrugs* neh. Whatever. Just please continue. Chao!
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you really need to continue this story. Zell is so cute, but Seifer is my all time favorite character. And minus a few typos this story is really good. Hee hee I especially liked the way you described that kiss that Irvine and Zell shared. More please.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm too chicken to put my actual name here, so...
Nice story. This place could use a lot more Seifer x . T. Thanks for your contribution! ^_^
Nice story. This place could use a lot more Seifer x . T. Thanks for your contribution! ^_^
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man.. chp 2 was very sweet! Love how Irvine is the sex ed teacher. He can teach me anyday! Zell just gets cuter and cuter in this story even. I am eager to see what chp 3 will be like.