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Well, the concept is a good one, but you need to work on character development. Sure, Sephiroth was well developed, but everyone else seemed so one dimentional. I'm not putting down your work, I think you can tell a good story. Just practice with developing your characters okay hun?

This was an amazing story. I enjoyed reading it, even looked forward to finding time to read it. You say that you're going to make a sequel? I can't wait for it and I bet it will be just as good.

This was moving to the point of non-return, thank you so much for writing it ! Who knows why I especially liked that you changed "Sephy" to "Sephiroth" right after Wutai war, seemed like he matured~

That was one of the most gripping and heartwrenching first chapters I have ever read. My eyes welled up with tears! I'm anxious to continue reading, but terrified as well. It's the strangest feeling. Be assured, I'll be reading chapter 2 the moment I finish this review, which incidentally is the first I've ever written on this site. Only one other story on this site has affected me in such a way, but yours is the first that has compelled me to write a review.

Do not be surprised if you see my name attached to a review in the following chapters.

I've never had my emotions so manipulated reading a story in all my life! I had to turn off the computer after reading Chapter 2, and making it to the end of Chapter 3 was nearly as difficult. Does your reader get any relief by the end? I'd like to think things couldn't get worse for him, but you know they do. Excellent writing!

What is with fanfics making me cry lately?!

That was truely amazing. I had kept up with this fic since it started but got out of habit. I finally got around to re-reading it and finally finishing it. And i'm so glad i did. You are an amazing writer. Your characters are so engaging adn well thought out. They don't deviate. I love your zack. He's so much fun ^-^

i don't know what else to say other than Wow. And i'm ever so glad that your planning a sequel. I'll be able to sleep now ^.^ Everybody needs hugs.

Thank you so much for sharing.

I wish to inform you that you are simply an amazing writer, and I want to throw in some more adjectives about how awesome your skills are, but that will fill a lot of space.

I have never actually cried while reading a fanfic until I read Eternal Fall.
The day after I finished reading it I was in such utter shock, I actually took a few days off of school because the skill and effectiveness of your writing abilities put me into such a sad mood (Sephiroth is an innocent and did not deserve what happened to him)

I look forward to a sequel if you are planning one.

Thank you.

O.O

*is an uber Sephiroth freak (read: fan), and is so completely stunned and tear streaked from numerous bouts of crying that she fails to know what to say*

I hate Jenova. I reallllllllllllllly do. (My poor Sephy!!! Nooooooooooooo~~~~~~~~~ *bursts into tears all over again IRL*)

*wails & sobs more*

Oh GODS that was beautiful~!!!! TToTT *sobbing*


::Hours later::

*still crying*

Can't wait to read... a sequel and... *sniffs* possibly more chapters now. Shit, I can't see straight -- eyes blinded by tears.

~the Seph

You know, i have never been one for crying but in this case i couldn't help it. Wow.

Thanks for the comments guys! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :) I hope to write many more stories in the future!