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for Eternal Fall

by HotaruReborn

person Laura
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE this story so much it is absolutly amazing. you are a wonderful writer and im looking forward to the next chapter.
i didnt however like the way seph handled clouds self injury thretening never really works ...but maybe thats just me being stupid? anywho great story keep up the good work!
person Callisto
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0_0 this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I want to read
more, plzzzz i beg of youuuu
person Tavameh
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your approach to Sephiroth's personality and past is phenomenal!'s e's exciting to see such a story written so well. It's appropriately disturbing, as well. This might be the fanfic that gets me all addicted! Thanks! (*pouts* you will write more??? if not, you're risking alienating a perfectly impressionable and artistic newcomer of a woman. I may be forced to do some of this fan art that I've avoided so long.)
person SpirasFayth
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! What a cool b-day present for me. (You updated right around my b-day, March 27th am am so addicted to this story, I'm going to re~read it again while waiting for the next chapter. I'm eager to see who those characters are that are going to come in. ::Excited:: Not to rush, but please update soon as possible!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nifty!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, please continue. Even if it takes a long time, keep going, fans like me can wait. :)
person Jita
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still great a great chapter like the others! The emotions you show through this fic are impressivly well described!


Keep on the awesome work!
person SpirasFayth
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for more I am so addicted to this story....!! I wanted to hug Sephy as usual!
person Tony
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit these are good. You put so much deatail that it kinda scares me. (srry if I spell things wrong) I cant wait till you wright more. I mean how do you make this stuff up? I am sad for those girls they were raped by there own fater. Well I am srry I havn't seen your Kingdom heart out Iut I have to tell you that this is one of the best stories I have ever read. I also want to say"COULD YOU TELL ME WHEN YOU RIGHT MORE PLZ" I cant wait till the next one. Even though I am kinda scared of what is going to happen next. well e-mail me.
person AliaMorte
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap.

Now, I'm not one for non consensual sexual acts, murder or rape, but this story is amazingly intoxicating. I read two chapters and feel as if I just downed soing ing alchoholic. Fast paced, Evocative as no get out, sexy as hell, and Addictive, It's beautiful. Now, If You would just update more often. And If I could get over the fact that I'm actually liking the more depressing parts of this...

-Alia