rate_review Reviews

I've been following this story for a long time....and you are one of my personal favourite writers! ^____^ The way you describe Sephy as innocent and a good soul is magnificent, laced with some humour by Zack and bits of dark angst...T___T I hate Hojo and Jenova! >___<;;;

Keep writing! ^___^

SHIT! *Throws rotten veggies at Jenova* Damn her! I so wanted Seph not to turn in this, I really did! He don't deserve to die!!!!! *Wail* Please don't kill Zacky or Seph! It's just not fair if you do! Amazing and heartrending chapter! Poor Seph, from Bad, to worse, to apocalyptic! *Sighs* he never gets a break. It must be frustrating to have to fix all the gltches, I hope you cna get Ch. 4 back! Good luck!

This chapter (Lost) made me cry. That's the first time a fanfic's ever done that to me. O_O

Fucking awesome. *Demands an alternate, AU sort of ending where Sephy and Cloud get to do all sorts of delightful things to each other forever. In a field. With flowers. Bunnies optional*

please finish. i love this story. and i would very much like to read the sequal, if and when ever you make one. keep on creating. i live. everyone is portrayed very nicely. thanks and by.

O_o wow.........

ok let me tell you, i've been seeing this fic for a while and have been avoiding it like the plague b/c most of the stories the i've read about sephy and cloud's past were.....well.... not very good. but finally i gave in and read the first chapter if your fic and.......... i was hooked. this story was the first thing i saw when i woke up and the last thing i saw when i went to sleep for the last 5 days. (i would have finished sooner but a girl's gotta work, ya know) Finally i finished chapter 19 this morning and all i have to say is ..............wow............. just wow. there is abosolutely nothing that i would change about this fic. i mean its well detailed, the characters personalities are just amazing and very enjoyable. hell i even liked the way that hojo acts in this fic. it is so original! i escpecially love your OC Ki and your Zack. ^__^ you have exceptional talent. I am very much looking foward to reading your future chapters. next few shall be very interesting! I am SO HAPPY that i gave this fic a try. i would have been missing out great if i didn't! I personally give you permission to shoot any1 that attempts to flame this fic. And if you do get flamers it's probably because they're jealous of your talent! Thank you for writing this, you've definitely brightned my week! Looking foward to your update!

P.S. thankies for bringing back Vincent in chap 19. (is a shameless Vincent lover)

Devious Lil Devil

This. Is. Amazing! Make it AU! Oh PLEASE make it AU! I've fallen completly in love with your protrayal of the charctors, I don't think I could stand it if they turned Cannon! Sephy and Vinny need some down time to talk, recover and discover many things! An amazing piece of litaray art, I really felt almost if I'd been drowning in the story for this past day and a half I've been devouring it! Your Cloud is cute, inncoent, and somehow jaded all at once! Your Zack protrays a quirky counterbalence for all of Seph's moodyness! Your Vincent is just...amazing...He's suffered so much, and we, as the reader, feel almost as though we have suffered with him. And your Speh....Wow...Just wow....We've lived his life with him, we've cried with him, we've felt his pain, and his emotions (The kitten undid me completly) we've lived with him as he was forced to grow up too fast, and we've experienced his contuined innocence. He's is just an amazing charactor, completly 3-D. Unlike the one in the game, he feels, and we know he feels, because we've felt withg him. *Sigh* You're truely an amazing artist, I look forward to reading more.

Did I mention this was an amazing fic? My god. I'm dying to see another chapter! Seriously! I got to 'Study' and now I've gone and bitten off all my nails. Funny how you can know how something is going to turn out but you still want to read between the lines. Honestly, I hope you get s'more up soon. I love your style of writing, and you do Sephiroth justice completely. I still think my favorite character would have to be Zack though. Man that guy rocks. *grin* You do such an excellent job expanding on what you've been given and throwing in random things like Ki. I'm gonna end up going Sepho-insane if I don't read more soon. Keep up the wicked work!

Oh my god.....I love this chapter....*sniff* Sephy meets vincent again after so long.....T_____T Wah! Write more, please!!! ^___^

Why is it that all the good... excuse me, great authors never update their stories? Or if they do, it takes them a month or two?

I really love this so far, definately one of the best FFVII fics I've read. So many of them are crappy. I can't find one fault, it's all absolutely perfect. And I love your portrayal of well, everyone.

Update ASAP, please. Don't make me start begging. ;)

This story is...incredible? It has so many facets and so much depth - lack of sex scenes is hardly a shortcoming with how much you've structured and filled this story out.
Though...where can it go from here? Ever since you first mentioned the Nibelheim missions I was worried about this point. How do you keep it together when Sephiroth s its it?
If you can manage to continue from here, you will have my undying admiration.
Best of luck.

And where's Vincent!? (Huge Vincent fangirl)