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Another great chapter, well worth the wait. But now of course I have to wait to see what happens next!

I appreciate the direction in which its going... very mysterious even though I've played the game numerous times.

Oh, I'm so glad you finally updated~! I always get so worried when an author doesn't update a story for a long time, but I'm silly like that. @_@; This is the best story on this site, no question. Keep up the awesome work! ^.^

O_O

Wow...

This is... one of THE best FFVII fics I've ever read. One of the best fics I've read EVER. And there's a lot of crappy ones out there, so this is all the more precious. ^_^ It's very unique. I love your portrayal of the characters and the plot. Especially your Zack, he's such a huggable goofball. I'm not quite sure if I've ever seen Sephiroth like this, but I love the way you've written him very much. Makes me feel even more sad for him with how much Jenova screws around in his mind. XD And Cloud... the cuddley lil angsty chocobo.

Erm... can't remember if this is AU. o_O If it is, I'd love to see where you go with this. If it isn't... I'd still wanna see how you'd write everything...

*hops back and rereads the new chappie*

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! C'MON I AM DIEING HERE..... I have to know what happens next PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow. Wow. Wow. /Wow/. That's all I cay aty at the moment. Your story is simply awesome, and definitely among some of the best FFVII-fiction that is out there, in my opinion. The story is entirely plausible and had me captured from the start, and your portrayal of the characters is just beautiful. It's sad and it's dark, but that's perfectly alright. This is a marvellous take at Sephiroth's childhood/youth, if I've ever seen one.
Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more!

~ Papillon

honestly your story is fucked up... are you a pedophile or something... i mean god..... you need to really think about how disturbing this piece of shit is really....

To the two negative noters above, you should have read the warnings and then stopped reading the moment you saw something that disturbed you. This is an extremeong ong story, so you had plenty of time to make a smart decision and stop reading. Use your common sense and stop bitching and complaining. The reviews aren't for your envious notes.

Anyway, thanks for the email Sirius. The story keeps getting better. I decided that my story wasn't going the way I wanted, so I let it fall back for a while until I think of how I want to redirect it. I'll email you once a new chapter is up.

-S. Wolf

This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. The way you capture the emotion is amazing. It took me about 3 or 4 evenings to read up to chapter 18 and I can't wait for more. The scenarios Sephiroth finds himself in are very believeable and would indeed explain why he turned out the way he did. (personally I think he's misunderstood, not evil ^_^) Keep up the good work! ^^

You defently did NOT do your homework with this fic. I and many of my friends come from an abusive back ground. Mine very light considering. ::shakes her head:: This is a f-ing shame. I mean you didn't even BOTHER to do your hork ork with FF7. It's disgusting, and I do not see how you can call yourself a fanfic writer. ::spits on the ground in front of you:: I hope you never wright stuff like this agian. And do your bloody homework.

I was reading this fic thanks to a friend who told me about it and I must say youe a e a way of making everything realistic, as if it truly was from the game itself. Your story inspired me to write my own and sorry if it seems slightly similar. If it does, I will change some things upon your request. But you make the characters so life-like with their personalities it's almost as if you're basing them off real people. Please continue, I'm anxiously waiting to find out what happens next.