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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was great, cant wait for the next chapter ^-^ well hey I dont mind how long they are. You keep writing and I will keep reading.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RIGHT MORE
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit these are great....forget proofing I love it....your words wrap around each other making the whole story great. I wish I could write like that. I am writting my own story but it isn't good at all. I just have to say that this is one of the best stories i have read. WRITE MORE!!!!!!
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More wonderfulness... can't wait to see what happens next... Eee!
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Powerful chapter indeed, very dark. I always pictured Cloud to be the one everyone took while he was in soilder...poor lil one. And Zack, he is such a great guy...what a friend. I love it now that he is there for Seph... The story is getting so much deeper and darker...I can't wait for another update!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowness of epic proportions. Just... yeah. I am truly and totally loving this thing. *encourage, encourage*
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YIPEE~~!!!! I love this fic! This chapter was so good! It's been awhile since I've seen rought, hard-core sex! It's a nice change! This has inspired me to write another chapter on one of my fics!!!! THANK YOU~~~~!!!!!!
Lauren
Lauren
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome. Upate soon, will ya?
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Seph is no longer Sephy :(! Well, no its cool, its like a big turning point. And Zack and Cloud! Yay!