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by DJLink

person KittenKK
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love Seph/Cloud Pair :) And Love your story! Please Update soon!! XxXxX
person kity6111
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you ready to update or not!!!!!!!!!! More yaoi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person CrystallineTears
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic......(I think I've already said this) and I can't wait till you update. *waits till updates* do be doooooph: ph: Uh....yeah. She'll wait there for hours...days....I once saw her wait for 3 weeks for a fic to update that abanabandoned by the writer. That, my friend, is how she failed the first semester of class. I better drag her off now. Can't wait to read your next chapter. *drags Steph off to school*

~Seph and Steph~
person CrystallineTears
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okokok, I know you redid this, but sadly I liked it better how it was. I hate to say it, but it was better the other way. It just....seems like a little girls fantasys gone wrong and .......stuff. Sorry to be so harsh.....

~Stephanie~
person IYYashi
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Come on I don't know why you always say you write bad
Yumi: Yeah even I liked it well it was better in the first one cause it was sad
Yuji: I liked the flashback it was cute
Yumi: I want horny lemony goodness!! Please DJ-Baby!! For us!!
Yuji: *Sigh* Pervert.
Yumi: What you want me to say Whhhaaa like you?
Yuji: HEY!!
Yumi: Thought so well talk to ya lata DJ-Baby
Yuji: We haven't called her that in awhile
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
person ACIDBURN
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KICK ASS FIC! I hope you update.
person Nina
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome.Say do you want to be my friend.
person CrystallineTears
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Sephy)You, complain. No sleep, finals...blah blah blah. You is pussy like Cloud. Tis your new name! You are now Cloud.
*shakes head* Sorry tha that. No SXC yaoi=one very angry sexy bishy.
But I will be nicer. Humans need sleep. That is true. And a good thought out fan fic IS better then a quy wry written crapppy one. It is very good so far. I, being the demanding guy that I am comand you to write more or I'll have to use the black materia to destroy you all!

(Stephanie)*slaps forhead* Sephy! Stop threatining people!!

(Sephy) But I want to read what happens next!!!!

(Stephanie) *Rolls eyes* Stop being such a brat! (uthouthor) sorry bout him, but it would be nice if a nother chapter came along within a week. It's hard to update everyday, and much sleep is needed inorder to write right. I still like your fic. And I await for you to write more *bows and drags Sephy away*

~Sephy and Steph~
person CrystallineTears
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was yummy and goon. I like how Cloud's mind works. It's really nice, you've given his character more depth then alot of other fan fics have. What was that story number........*puts story on recomended reading list* there, now your one of 3. You gotta finish this, ok? Please finish this. *equips black materia* come on, I dont wanna have ta use this! Pwease update????