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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA Lulu's part at the end was priceless!! Loved it!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, yum!
and, THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR PUTTING HINTS OF AURONLULU IN!!!!
I LOVE YOU! (lol, jk... i just love you as an author!)
and, THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR PUTTING HINTS OF AURONLULU IN!!!!
I LOVE YOU! (lol, jk... i just love you as an author!)
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good gods, the reviewers here are awfully insecure in their sexualities!!!! Why can't they just say, "this isn't my cup of tea!" instead of complaining about a story not written to their tastes? The one guessing you wanked to it is particularly pathetic. This is an EROTICA AND PORN SITE. Why on earth is that person here?
Annyway. Story itself is fairly well-written with better description, attention to character's mannerisms and personality, and overall writing skills than most AFF writers bother to do. You even managed to find some justification for the cousin-cousin action and for why they'd be doing this. It comes off hot without being "random sex partner A screws random sex partner B".
Lulu is my favorite character, and so many people get her wrong, both her knack for being impassive, and that quiet wicked streak that shows up in some of her spellcasting when she makes decidedly flirtatious comments while burning things to a crisp.
The speculation about Auron and Lulu's scientific experiment (she's such a logical woman, and also quite strong-willed enough to seize what she wants!), carried on offscreen, was also appealling. If you ever get the urge to write that scene... please please please post a link to it on community.livejournal.com/aulu, where the Lulu/Auron crazies keep each other entertained. (Only some of it is smut, but smut's one enjoyable way to muck around with those two characters. They have such great zingers.)
Annyway. Story itself is fairly well-written with better description, attention to character's mannerisms and personality, and overall writing skills than most AFF writers bother to do. You even managed to find some justification for the cousin-cousin action and for why they'd be doing this. It comes off hot without being "random sex partner A screws random sex partner B".
Lulu is my favorite character, and so many people get her wrong, both her knack for being impassive, and that quiet wicked streak that shows up in some of her spellcasting when she makes decidedly flirtatious comments while burning things to a crisp.
The speculation about Auron and Lulu's scientific experiment (she's such a logical woman, and also quite strong-willed enough to seize what she wants!), carried on offscreen, was also appealling. If you ever get the urge to write that scene... please please please post a link to it on community.livejournal.com/aulu, where the Lulu/Auron crazies keep each other entertained. (Only some of it is smut, but smut's one enjoyable way to muck around with those two characters. They have such great zingers.)
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok this sucked very badly. One of the worse pieces of shits i have ever read. next time make it a hetero fic or at least have a dude fuck one of the 2 chicks.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I loved it but Lulu should have totally been included well it was good and that's what matters when everythings said and done. I liked it.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a shame that this storry has only 20 hits. I think it's really good!
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol. great ending. great description.
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. How it was written, how you made the story likely -well, realistic at least - . I noticed you've got a lot of negative reviews *shrugs* everyone's got their opinion...
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool story like it alot love the game and most stories about it need more stories though