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for Disorderly Conduct

by KagetsuAsame

person Aerie
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah mi god! I can't WAIT?! Are you CRAZY?! I want more, and more NOW! yeeheehee I do really like it ! Mmmm...Lord Sephiroth...
person Crystalline Tears
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person noxxxxshinigami
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty cool.^.^ How about more????
Oh, and a threesome with Vincent would be very delicious....äh I mean interesting.hehe^-^
person CrystallineTears
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice. I likes lots. I can't wait till you write more. I will wait patiently till you write. *sits and waits* *3 hours later* are you done yet? no? *sighs and wait's a few more hours* waite here, i'm gonna get foods. *gets food and comes back and waits some more*
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such an evil man you are, Sephy-sama. I like it. ^^;;
Anyhoo, this wasn't too bad... I feel like shooting myself for admitting something like that, but ~sighs~ I'll live...
Anyhoo, good work.
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... Sephy-sama, you're just so... so.... sexy when you're forceful! ^^;;
Anyhoo, So far so good.
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe.... Quite humorous how Sephy-sama is teasing Cloudikins. ^^;; Once again, good work so far.
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... Cloudikins, you shouldn't have made him angry. And Sephy-sama is sooooo cruel. Hehe... ^^;; Still good.
person bakurasgirl
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! CLOUD X SEPHY ACTION! MORE MORE MORE! mmmm...Vinnie.
Really good so far!
person CrystallineTears
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Dances around* love it!!! Can't wait till you write more!!! *looks at sephy being all dominating* yep, you got Seph's personaltiy right.... I love youor story and will be waiting for you to write more.

~Stephaine~