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for Dra Husyt fru lysa eh vnus dra Lumt

by SPWP

person bek
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who can actually read this???????????????????????????????
person fsb
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person FF-obsessed Neko girl
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why those two dissed this story so badly....and in such a racist way too ;/

It's a very original idea! (I have to say that I'm glad for the translated version, though).

I liked the story too, by the way.
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It couldn't hurt to be in english
person Seven
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story I've read In Al Bhed. I like the idea, it's original!
person Izzy
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
XD!!! I actually translated this myself when I read it, then I saw that their was a translated version of it, eheh... Oh well, it was a good story.
person Open Sesame
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Here, I've got my own language Motha Fucka:

GO FUCK A CHICKEN, YOU DINGLE BERRY MUNCHIN PEICE OF SHIT.

What in God's great name was that shit? Who THE FUCK is gonna get on adult fan fiction, and read a story in Al Bhen!? We're not Afgani's motha fucka!

Now get yo Afgani ass back in the crackpipe where you were spawned from
person SingleBLACKfemale
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello, wuz up my niggaz? Yo this story is the most illiterate thing i've ever read. take it down you retard
And don't learn fake languages, it makes you look retarded.
Peace, out