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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're probably not even around anymore to see this, but I liked your story a lot. I think it does a great job of showing what Kain saw in Rosa, and at the same time how Golbez's mental manipulations corrupted it into him viewing Rosa in ways she isn't and going too far.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful. I love it. The pure pleasure and torture of one of my favorite characters ever all in one. God... I wish I could write like this. Please, let's see some more inward thoughts of some angsty characters?
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like reading about Kain's time under Golbez's control. You have made him very in character. :)
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. He's really evil... I seriously doubt that Rosa will do anything with him after hurting her so bad.
Unless, Rosa does like him and wants him. Anyway, I really liked it. It makes me wonder if its the mind control
or him really thinking that. Because in the game he really loved Rosa, so I wonder why he would hurt her...
^^' Sorry... I just writing my thoughts.
Unless, Rosa does like him and wants him. Anyway, I really liked it. It makes me wonder if its the mind control
or him really thinking that. Because in the game he really loved Rosa, so I wonder why he would hurt her...
^^' Sorry... I just writing my thoughts.
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty cool. You should try writing this in third person and extending it. Hehe, i'd love to see what really become of it. But for how short it is, it's really good. Keep up the good work.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting piece of work even though its a little OOC for both Kain and Rosa. Like the other said, Kain may have been jealous of Cecil, but I serioulsy don't think he would hurt Rosa. As for Rosa herself, she's not the kind of woman who would manpulate and play men off against one another. Still, I like your story. You really should write a sequel; the sooner, the better.
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, glad someone did the "what happened while Kain had Rosa chained to the wall" fic! I can cross it off my to-do list now. I always thought there was an untold story there waiting for the right person. So glad you decided to tackle the topic!
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is an interesting piece of work even though I have to agree with Gabrielle that its a bit OOC. Its true that Kain was envious of the love between Cecil and Rosa and that he may have even been secretly jeleous of his friend, but controlled or not, I don't think he would ever consider harming Rosa. Anyway, great fic. Please update!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good. Please continue; I hate to be left hanging! >_<
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very iteresting if a little out of character. You really must continue because I'm dying to know what happens next! ^_^