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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
finally you updated good job and keep it up.
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really gonna review this, but WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU CUT OFF THE LESBIAN SCENE!!!!! I'm tired of all these bullshit lemon stories with m/f crap. More yuri damnit! And I assume you're a guy so that RY maY makes me wonder why you would hold off on it. Hell the majority of this story should have been yuri.
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work I want to see some Yuna action.
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fun fic, nice to see some good old PWP around here...I was playing FFX2 earlier and kept thinking there was potential for a lotta smut...hope you continue this!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one very good story. I hope you continue it for as long as you can. Good luck on it.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice keep it up I want to see more of Yuna so update soon
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Story continue the great work like how it has some background and how Yuna acts all naughty with the dance. Update soon.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked the story finally brother gets his wish though it's alittle weird that it's cousin love but good story
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see you continue this; thus far, you've done what a lot of PWP fics fail to do, that being, maintain a balance between a character's original traits and the sex drive needed to sustain a PWP fic. On a technical level, I have no complaints about your writing, and while I can't say I was 'engrossed,' the style and content were both entertaining enough to keep me reading 'til the end of each chapter.
Of course, I'd also love to see what befalls Paine over the course of the fic...
Of course, I'd also love to see what befalls Paine over the course of the fic...
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. You have a good start. I hope you continue b'cause I wanna know what Rikku is gonna say to Yunna and Brother getting busy in the cabin.