rate_review Reviews

i really enjoyed reading this. you are a skillfull writer. one of the more skill full ones here. your characters are fun to explore, your sex scenes are well detailed without falling into repetition or resorting to foul languate, and a joy to read, the rest of the story develops nicely too and it reads nice and easy. some writers attempt what you do, but fail as their diction is too faltering, and i get the impression they dont form the scenes properly. you do though! i hope you keep updating this fic. i am looking forward to you next chapter. i am also grateful for you going into more detail about how materia works, as i have not played the game ( Only watched my brother while he was at it) and own advent children. i have actually learned something too!

i loved this chapter. cant wait for the next one and dont ever stop writing this

oooooh hes bad lol. But in a good way ^_^ Hm,wonder what Clouds gonna think...*snicker* I actually like this couple,u dont see much of them these days. Gee Tifa decisions..decisions,hehe. Update soon. :)

great fic; you dont see many tifa/zack fics out their keep up the great writing and hope to read more soon.
Will there be other characters showing up like vincent or sephiroth?

*eyebrow raises* Wow never seen this couple before lol. Interesting...Update soon. ^_^

i like zackxtifa fics. i'm a huge fan actually! so after reading the first few chapters, i was really excited! i said to myself, it's another zackxtifa fic! YEY! can't wait for another chapter.

Tifa/Zack ain't something you see very often! Please expand on this, its really intriguing.

Love it, Keep updating =)

In my current jobless situation I have more time on my hands, so I decided to re-read your story. And I'm so glad I did. I really hope you plan to add more to this. We really need more well writen stories in this section. I mean the action, the dialogue, and settings were perfect. I loved every second of this.

That was great!