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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Idk if you really don't remember the name, but when it shows Seifer fishing, he's in Fisherman's Horizon, better known as FH. You know, the town on the water you crash into during the missile crisis (or rather, immediately after). Otherwise, very well-written--and I'm a perfectionist about spelling, grammar, and punctuation, so I should know. Good job. =D
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the funniest bucket of man orientated alphabet soup I have ever read...*is in stitches* you sooo need to write a sequel...if you have not already done so *runs off to double check*
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I like your fic! Short and sweet, and leave people feeling satisfied. I love the conversation between those two, it is so cute!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Did Seifer just said sorry? Did Seifer just stopped?"
Ok... the fic is chuckle-worthy and kinda hot, but ^that^ has got to go. I promise you, if you proofread it (computer spellcheck sucks though), and fixed the past/present tense pems,ems, it would be *way* better. It was only hard to enjoy because little mistakes kept jolting me back inealieality; it didn't suspend my disbelief.
Don't let little mistakes hold you back. ^_^
Ok... the fic is chuckle-worthy and kinda hot, but ^that^ has got to go. I promise you, if you proofread it (computer spellcheck sucks though), and fixed the past/present tense pems,ems, it would be *way* better. It was only hard to enjoy because little mistakes kept jolting me back inealieality; it didn't suspend my disbelief.
Don't let little mistakes hold you back. ^_^