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July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the most amazing Rikku/Auron story that I've EVER read. To see the entire journey from Rikku's eyes...to see the love between her and Auron...simply wonderful!
This story was posted a long time ago and I don't know if you'll get this review, but I want to truly thank you for sharing this with everyone. This just makes my craving for this pairing even worse, and sadly, there is a great lack of quality tales about these two.
Thank you so much!
Ezzie
PS: This story was corrupted in one of the archive crashes a long time ago. I put in a request to the one of the Admins, Demongoddess061 so she can get the fix the glitches in the story. ;-)
This story was posted a long time ago and I don't know if you'll get this review, but I want to truly thank you for sharing this with everyone. This just makes my craving for this pairing even worse, and sadly, there is a great lack of quality tales about these two.
Thank you so much!
Ezzie
PS: This story was corrupted in one of the archive crashes a long time ago. I put in a request to the one of the Admins, Demongoddess061 so she can get the fix the glitches in the story. ;-)
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! That was the best story I've ever read! You kept them in character wonderfully! There were a few spelling typos with the Al Bhed "oiu" instead of "oui" but that's ok. I just over looked it. I just wish that AFF's server/client switch hadnt messed up the grammar and spelling of most/if not all the stories here on this site....:P
But it was so sweet. Auron is most definately the coolest FFX character. Lulu comes in 2nd :D
But that was SO cool! I love it SOOOOOO much! Thank you for the story you have a great imagination.
But it was so sweet. Auron is most definately the coolest FFX character. Lulu comes in 2nd :D
But that was SO cool! I love it SOOOOOO much! Thank you for the story you have a great imagination.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well written
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it's after 6 am, it's dark, my keyboard is missing a key and I'm sobbing- let's see if I can make this readable.
You are, simply put, a poet. There are not words in me to express what I feel right now. I've gone without sleep and food to finish reading this (haha) and now that it's over I feel an ache- I both looked forward to the end and feared it, and I cry for both the emotion and at the loss of the chance to read more. I didn't even bother to finish the game, spoilers be damned. Once I started reading I couldn't think of anything else but reading more.
Here's where it gets cheesy. It was just so beautiful and so heartfelt. You captured them inexplicably well, doing the characters true justice, giving them life where so many others have only glanced the surface. You are what a writer should be. The fact that I'm still crying and heartsick is a testament to that, at least in my opinion. You have my utmost respect as an artist and my unending gratitude for creating something so epic.
Thank you. I hope that made sense.
Love,
Ping
You are, simply put, a poet. There are not words in me to express what I feel right now. I've gone without sleep and food to finish reading this (haha) and now that it's over I feel an ache- I both looked forward to the end and feared it, and I cry for both the emotion and at the loss of the chance to read more. I didn't even bother to finish the game, spoilers be damned. Once I started reading I couldn't think of anything else but reading more.
Here's where it gets cheesy. It was just so beautiful and so heartfelt. You captured them inexplicably well, doing the characters true justice, giving them life where so many others have only glanced the surface. You are what a writer should be. The fact that I'm still crying and heartsick is a testament to that, at least in my opinion. You have my utmost respect as an artist and my unending gratitude for creating something so epic.
Thank you. I hope that made sense.
Love,
Ping
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really feel that this story deserves alot of credit. If this was depicted on video, it would be the most touching too, especially the epilogue. I cried when I finished reading the end of sto story. It's really a good form of work~! Congratulations to your story, no it should be called a novel instead. =)
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good y, wy, which gives us an insight into the lives of two of the characters in the journey. what i also enjoyed, was the telling of the basic day to day events, like eating, preparing of the food, setting up camp, and idle banter of the characters as they traversed spira. this is a great side story and i sincerly believe that you should try to gain permission from Sqare Enix and publish this story. good luck to you in your future. Sincerely, Matt Gerteisen
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omg.. this story was so moving.. I actually felt every movemnt of every character throughout this entire story. I was very sad to see it end, I cried very much at the end.. but that is not a bad thing... It just shows you write beautifully. Please keep up the tremendous work.. I am an avid RIkku/Auron shipper.. but thsi story... is by far.. the best in every area... I almost didnt want o finish reading it... Just do I could come bac later for more.. but I sat down for an hour and a half and read it all the way through.
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading!!! especially after 29 chapters!!! You have an awesome writing style and you have kept really close to the original story line, which makes it all the better!!! congrats and keep writing!
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I read part of this on FF.net and guess what, it disappeared!!! WELL I'm just so glad that it's back..although not where I'd expect it... you could have atleast left the title on FF.net and put a link on there. But hey, as long as it's up SOMEWHERE that's all that matters. I loveeeeddddd this. *tears*