rate_review Reviews

Great story. Nice lemon.. Thanks for sharing

Wow, for once in fanfiction Cloud is actually seme to someone besides Kadaj. Personally, I think that Cloud ends up being more in-character if he's on top of someone. I've always found it annoying when people see him as a poor, defenseless, immature teenager with an overly thin waist. For Christ's sake he's 21!

... Uh, ending the pointless ranting now... @_@

This was pretty good, it wasn't dragged out for too long. Although I sorta think you made Vincent a little bit too angsty and uncaring than really is. I think he actually improved since he was introduced to the party. I mean, he is more open as the game goes on. He joked a couple of times, he actually laughed once and...
Well there I go rambling again. Sorry.

But really, it's not as bad as I'm making it seem. ^_^

AWh! The Cloud/Vincent was good ^^ But I'm going to bounce over to he sequel and read the Cid/Vincent!! Yay for the two!


Good story nonetheless!

This was great and just so you know I would have reviewed the first chapter too. But I'm new to this fandom and didn't read the first chapter untill now.

Bravo. Well enjoyed, dear.

-Neptune

i think this fic. (make me feel) is a good fic. but i don't see how anyone could hate cloud i mean whats your beef with him. besides he's pretty cute.

Well, I found the tense a little off putting at times, set in present rather than past, but I think it worked over all. Nicely smutty, though not a pairing I trraditionally read, and I like the end lines a lot. They tie up what he's going through pretty well, this search to feel something for more than a fleetingent.ent.

You might want to run a spell check, I caught a couple of typos in the second chapter. ^_^

This is actually of tof the best stories I've seen around here, probably only passed by it's sequel. Poor Vince. Oh well, at least he gets what he set out for, in the end.

This story is one of the better ones I've read, so rest assured, you do have talent. I look forward to seeing more from you. Keep up the good work!

Great story! *pokes you for an update* Your lemon was really well written and descriptive, which is always good. *pokes again* I'm not a big Cloud fan, but I liked this. Keep up the great work!