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for In Our World of Efficiency

by Beautifullytwisted

person Hana1997
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Partially munched by AFF, but it still outshone the transcription errors. Well written. :)
person PessimisticPoet
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wai... That was lovely. *huggles Rufus and Tseng* I like that very much. And this doesn't have more reviews..? Why?
person CrystallineTears (to lazy to log in)
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* that was so sad..........but nice, but sad......*goes back to crying for Rufus adn Tseng*
person Miss Havok (too lazy to log in)
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Tseng/Rufus can be bliss, which it is here......thank you for making my day. One thing, however- you could expand your characterization, show more actions....just positive criticism, y'know.....other than that, fantastic!!