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June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Not awful, but there's no context for Sqaull and Rinoa having sex at that point... It makes it feel kind of lifeless. Also, there are some needless inconsistencies with the game, such as Rinoa knowing Squall's name and that he was a member of SeeD.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should have put in the sex pistols lyrics..that song Submission, you know..
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was sweet But..Are they in love or are they frinds with benifets?....
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Squall And Rinoa..I love the two, I hope you make more of the two. YOUR FIC AND YOU ROCK!!!
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, it's odd to see het in this section... ~_^
Why didn't she let him finish off? That was mean.
Why didn't she let him finish off? That was mean.