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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice start! :) I like that Rinoa is smart in this story. People need to stop portraying her as a ditzy moron. >.>;
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say wow. I love this story. I know it was written awhile ago. But still, the way it was but together. Perfect in every way.
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Nice story indeed, but even under such circumstances I have a hard time seeing Quistis going for a bully like Seifer. She's more likely to insult a bully (so that he wouldn't even realise he's insulted, or can find no way to rebutt it) than go out with him, much less do things like wait for him like a "good little girlfriend". Rinoa the flashing cheerleader, yes I'd buy it, but Quistis, heck no. I can see her falling for Squall (most likely), and since she looks like she likes the tall, dark and silent type, possibly even Vincent! Zell or even Irvine are possible dates, but not Seifer. And there's no way in hell Rinoa is smart, AU or no. She was dumb in the game, and since this AU isn't really an AU (but time compression), there's NO WAY she can be ahead of everyone else. So I have a little problem with the believeability there. But otherwise, this is a cool fic. The flashing is really funny. ^__^
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fuujin is frickin' hilarious! "Score." LOL! Methinks the pairing might have some merits indeed.
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? That was, in a word, fucking awesome! okay, that was two words... but wow. You deserve an award for the most original AU fic!
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a really cool and sometimes hysterical story, but the ending was like... uhhh.. -__-'
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freg Gog God WOW!!! I was so confused for the whole time untill the very last part... that was so great and unexpected... i never thought that it was time compression.... oh my goodness... you did it... someone actually surprised me!!! Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, but it would have been much better if endeended out the story with Squall/Quistis and Fujin/Rinoa other than that, it was great!!!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Did you REALLY have to have Rinoa tear hair off THAT area? Yeah, it sounds good, but it aint very realistic! I dont think it's usually long enough for someone to get a good enough grip to do something like that!