AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Can this last?

by CrystallineTears

person vala21
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really, really like this story, any chance you will be updating soon? *big puppy eyes*
person Random Lurker
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, there! I'd love to know how this'll end - any chance you'll be updating soon?
person silver
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you updating thi? i seriously hope so! tis very good, i like it lots!
person patient
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i guess reviewing does work. i wish the chaps were longer, but i love the story line so far,cant wait to read more
person 241midnightspecial
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AArrggg! Now that my comp will let me review I forgot what I was going to say! *broods* oh yeah.... UPDATE!!! I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing.

C~ya!
person patient
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update update update!!! short chaps, but nice story. plz update soon thx
person Lazy Hung Over Havi
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've done with it. Maybe be a little more descriptive, put more emotion into it. Just constructive criticism, but other than that, it was good. Would love to see more, as usual.
person feeling lazy 241
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you updated! yeah!!! you made me cry! Not so yay!! *sniff* keep writing, I love your stuff
person Frost
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aarrgh! How could they do something like that? I say Vincent should take it out of their asses! Good story, can't wait to read more!
person 241midnightspecial
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Kage, you can't kill Sephy! I don't know what I would do without my Sephy, he's the light of my life. I live for Sephiroth, he is the strenght in me. Please keep hime. Se. Still love the chappies, keep writing.