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by CrystallineTears

schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's good so far. Please don't let Sephi-sama die though. I'll cry if you do.
person 241midnightspecial
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vinny's to a wall then he's barely escapeing. Sephy's all cute and gathering flowers then ripped away from his love and sucidial. Has your life gone 180 on you or something? Love the fic, I'll keep reading. Hope it has a happy ending.
person Lazy Miss Havok
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like where you're going with this. Maybe a little more characterization and stuff- I'm too stupid to think right now.....send me a copy and I'll help...promise. *grins* But over all I like where you're going with it!