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for Bedtime Story No. 2

by Charmz

person Himeno
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, Love the pairing of Squall and Quistis, too bad this fic end so soon, I was loving it. Though, I would like to make a request and I was wondering if you're able to do it for me. I am so in love with this fic that I couldn't have enough. I was wondering if you able to write another fic with both Squall and Quistis again. Please I hope you can. Hope to hear from you soon because I would love to read another of your great writings.
person Dark Phoenix
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this just as much as ever--you're a great writer, Erotichi! Hope to see the sequel soon! Meanwhile, please join the Quall group at yahoo and post your Quall fics there! ^_^ http://groups.yahoo.com/group/quall/
person slifer
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should really make an epilogue for this....cause this is REALLY REALLY GOOD
person QueenAdreena
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH! I figured it was Squall all along, but then you made me think it could be Seifer, but then i went back to Squall again. ^_^ This story was soooo good. I found the last chapter funny, when Quistis was pulling all the guys dicks out. Heh. But yeah, GREAT!
person iris
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My God!!!!! This is such a great story!!!! I love it to no end!
person Jen
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say, out of all the stories that you have posted on here, this is my favorite. i hope you're still thng ang about making a sequel. keep things seedy lol i luv it!
person Sinful
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I seriously loved your story.I actually was wide eyed....thats a bit of a first.Hope to read many more and plan to read others.^^
person Sinful
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the end,how she chesck Irvine,Zell,etc.As for rinoa i like the way you placed.While i was playing the game i always thought that she was better off with Seifer.Selphie and irvine drama very funny,especially the way the characters act so unique to your imagenaton yet believable.Also when she found out it wsnt Seifer by his...erm...member i was laughing.Thanks for a few laughs and a good read^^
person Mr. Pointy
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I knew it was Squall. Good stuff.
person Silver_Wing
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story!! I wish you would continue with it! Its soo intriguing!!