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for Bedtime Story No. 2

by Charmz

person quis
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It would be good to have in a scence like in the movie and i liked scene 3b better
person Jen
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Excellent plot. I can't wait for further chapters... hurry up with 'em.

I liked 3b better... it was better written, IMO. Howeverdo ldo like the movie idea, but you can incorperate that into later chappies, right?
person Anon
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"A" is waaaay better.
person Zee Okamiotoko
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I finally find this fic again, but, alas, it has not been updated since I last saw it. *sighs* I personally kinda like 3B better, since it flows much more smoothly. A definitely different take on miss Quisty, but I like it. Can't wait to see the next bits, it's coming along well.
person Ninja Gaijin
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's getting interesting... Oh, and thanks for answering. Not the answer I'd expected though.

I'd go with 3A, and promise me you'll get Quistis into a scene like what she saw on the limo... okay?
person Mr. Pointy
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Quistis would definitely make a hot stripper. I liked 3A by the way; the scene with the video was brilliant.
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and different!
I really love this!..everything is so well written and
well described that I get the pictures perfect in my head.
You really managed to create a mood and feeling to the enviroments, too!
Quistis was really a great choice for this kind of story I think.
I liked the 3A part better than 3B, not that to say 3B was bad.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Keep it up!!!
person *not registered*
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I like Version B better, especially that part in the mall *evil grin* 'coz I've always liked Squall/Quistis pairing. Hope you'll finish this soon. I'll be looking forward to the sequel. Good luck!
person Anon
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like A better. i sure could use a limo ride right about now. THAT WAS HOT!
person Thyamant
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was quite a plot you made ^^
By the way, I like the third chapter version B more than A :P
I hope to be able to read the next chappie soon ^^

_Isa-chan_ Thyamant@hotmail.com