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Dear god i hope you're going to finish this.. -lol- i'm horridly addicted to your story line.
It's good, you write very well.
~Leaf~

Wow.

I've been reading your fics, and I think they're awesome. I read through Convergence 1 last night, and today I'm working on this one. It's great!

I love the way you write Seifer. I love his psychology, the way he's so intuitive about what people want but won't admit to, the way he uses that to get what he wants without any guilt or second thoughts whatsoever. Of course, they do really want it...

With one or two very excellent exceptions, I've never liked Rinoa. She's always either just a dumb bitch or somehow without explanation an unbelievable Mary Sue. But I like your Rinoa. I admit, I groaned a little when she was first mentioned, but I warmed up to her pretty quickly.

The scene where Squall was in "solitary confinement" was some yummy reading...what he was thinking about doing to Seifer made me drooooool. Like I said, I haven't finished this one yet, but I hope to see something like that happening. I always like to see Seify lose control...maybe in a one-shot if not in this one? *hope hope hope*

Anyway, awesome job! I stopped just so I'd have some late-night reading to lok forward to, and I can't wait to pick it back up again later!

I love love love this!!! Convergence pt 1 was sooo hot and good and yeah I really can't explain how much I loved it. This part 2 is very good also and I can't wait for it to be finished!! I've always loved this pairing or any mixture there of and you write it so well. It's really nice to be able to read such a great story that's written really well with a pairing I like. Please please finish this soon!!!

love it love it

Is this story still being worked on? Its very good. Ive read your convergence stories in the last 3 days instad of revising for my exams, hope you appreciate that! Pretty please?

Brilliant!!! Bloody Brilliant!!! This was definitly the best bit of FF8 writing i've EVER had the pleasure of reading!!! And about having the rest of part two up by Halloween; it's already past Thanksgiving! Where are you? Well, whatever you may be doing, PLEASE drop me a line as to when you think you'll have another chapter up, or if you're just going to finish it up before posting or whatever. *sigh* Damn that was a good story... Can't wait to read the rest... And I have to say, I love the little cute and playful moments between Seifer and Zell, I think those times are becoming my favourites. Also, I love the way you describe things. I'm a writer myself, though I don't post online, and I can't help but find myself getting impatient with my descriptive paragraphs. It always seems like I need someone to be saying something in order for things to be moving along, but then I can't remember the details myself! Ah well, i'll just work on that. But, my writer's problems aside, you really should get a move on!

~*Bloody_Rose*~

This is by far the best FF8 fic I ever read.
The scenario is excellently organised and the interaction between the different characters is simply perfect.
I really like the Squall X Zell couple which you greatly develop .
In simple and effective words: Bloody Brilliantly Perfect!
Please Keep indulging us with new chapters...

Wow! I've been reading yoic fic for a while now but alas, I'm one of those slack people who rarely review. I can never think of something constructive to say, still can't except keep up the good work. I check AdultFanFiction almost everyday to check if you've updated. I love your characterisation of the FFVIII characters, sometimes I think it's much harder to write someone elses character than writing one you've invented yourself. I'm glad there are great fan fiction writers out there so those of us who can't write get to enjoy your stuff. Thanks.

hey rhaps! when you gonna cont.?! j/k continue. please. with your other stuff, too. thank you. buh bye. :] later (sorry this is no review)

Ok, this is the last time I attempt to review this chapter! Whatever I do, I just can't send the damned thing! Sorry...

I'm gonna make it short this time, since I'm getting awfully impatient. You gave me a cookie so big, it's gonna take until nect chapter before I can eat it all. I just wish that I could make you write this EXACTLY how I want it. *sighs dreamily*

And for the record: I can't wait till December!

Hugs, Z