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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a fitting punishment. X3;
Wonderful use of detail, very amusing throughout
Wonderful use of detail, very amusing throughout
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much time and effort it has taken me to actually read this chapter. First, I could get into the site at all, and this little problem lasted at least a couple of days. And then you removed it and changed it, I take it, just when I got access. And then, I couldn't get inside... But yesterday - FINALLY - I got to read it, and I should have reviewed, if I'd had the mental capacity to do so. There's just one thing bothering me, which I'll probably understand as I read it the second ( no, third) time but I'll ask it anyway. Did Squall like Zell doing him???
Loved the chapter though! Although it was a long wait, it was all worth it!
Lots of huggles, Z
Loved the chapter though! Although it was a long wait, it was all worth it!
Lots of huggles, Z
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sooooooo, ah, what are zell and seifer going to go in their ALONE time? heh heh ;)
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
Wonderful Currie!!!!!!!!!!!
Zell is too cute as seme!!!!!
Whee!!!!! More soon? I hope?
Wonderful Currie!!!!!!!!!!!
Zell is too cute as seme!!!!!
Whee!!!!! More soon? I hope?
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So I wasn't sure I'd like it when Zell finally got a piece of Squall because I freely admit I'm not a fan of the character of Zell, but this wasn't painful at all. The way you wrote it made it seem less like sex and more like a heartfelt conversation, so it was good. I hope that came out right, lol. I enjoyed the chapter.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! We finally get to see the update! I -like- the lemon plot combination. And who cares about length when you have Squall and Zell in a shower together? ^^ I can't wait to see Zell and Seifer try to bond, either. Should be fun. ^^
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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You know, your talent is an amazing thing. I finished what you have of this story so far, and I was made very, very sad. You need to continue this so that little people like me can read it and be made happy. ^^' Um, at any rate... Thank you for this as well. It's wonderful to readngs ngs like this on a stormy day like today with a cup of hot, good, strong black coffee and giggle.
Please continue this. Don't make me beg!
You know, your talent is an amazing thing. I finished what you have of this story so far, and I was made very, very sad. You need to continue this so that little people like me can read it and be made happy. ^^' Um, at any rate... Thank you for this as well. It's wonderful to readngs ngs like this on a stormy day like today with a cup of hot, good, strong black coffee and giggle.
Please continue this. Don't make me beg!
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I should have reviewed this when I first read it (which was when you posted it), but for me it's been all work and no play. Which means no internet time. I'm only online now, 15 minutes before my alarmclock goes off, too check the delivery on on my new computer. Not that I got any wiser, because apparently, they don't post than information on the internet, or I'm just too stupid to know where to look. This have nothing to do with your story though. Just excuses for being my lazy self.
HOWEVER: I damn well liked this story, and I've analyzing it for a few days now in my head. Didn't get some of the conversations (the one between Seifer and Squall the most obvious) and I also had a little difficulty undersing ing Zell's ramble about our subconscioussessess-es-er. =o)
But it might come as a surprise as too why Squall let Zell stay at his aparment. Besides for the most apparent reasons (Zell was practically homeless and have these adorable puppyeyes that I'm sure even Squall has problems denying), there was just something... And it was not the fact that his bed was too big. I refuse to accept that!
Alright, now when there's about ten minutes left of my sleeping time, I should go back to bed.
Thanks for an amazing story!
Hugs, Z
PS: this is for chapter 8 a als also appologize for any misspellings. Seriously, It's 8.20 am and I'm fucking tired!
HOWEVER: I damn well liked this story, and I've analyzing it for a few days now in my head. Didn't get some of the conversations (the one between Seifer and Squall the most obvious) and I also had a little difficulty undersing ing Zell's ramble about our subconscioussessess-es-er. =o)
But it might come as a surprise as too why Squall let Zell stay at his aparment. Besides for the most apparent reasons (Zell was practically homeless and have these adorable puppyeyes that I'm sure even Squall has problems denying), there was just something... And it was not the fact that his bed was too big. I refuse to accept that!
Alright, now when there's about ten minutes left of my sleeping time, I should go back to bed.
Thanks for an amazing story!
Hugs, Z
PS: this is for chapter 8 a als also appologize for any misspellings. Seriously, It's 8.20 am and I'm fucking tired!
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, grapes. Have you ever eaten frozen grapes? Those are the best... Anyway. The story sure took a turn I wasn't expecting. But surprises can be good... ^^; Looking forward to the next update!
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, the dual Knight thing is an interesting twist. I can't see it bringing anything but angst for Squall. Oh, yeah, and future sex, so it's okay, lol. Great job. Your chapters never fail to hold my attention :)