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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story, especially when things like Squall jumping Seifer happen. ^^ I loved the first one, too, and I can't wait to see how this one turns out.
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Zell's a freakin slut! I like your Seifer but I wished that he and Squall could have a little alone time for awhile since it seems that Squall is either with Zell or Seifer's with Zelly...freaking Zell...*grins* Loving this!
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Rinoa's a very captivatinaracaracter. I liked that entire interaction with her at the gate. The kid -- sigh -- complication, but oh well. Again, great stuff!!! Always excited about the next part :)
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you should be really happy about his chapter. I was in awe of how well you write dialogue (and monologue).
And if Rinoa can maeifeeifer act like a whipped dog, she's not on my assasination list anymore!
Loved this chapter, even if there was no sex in it! =o)
Hugs, Z
And if Rinoa can maeifeeifer act like a whipped dog, she's not on my assasination list anymore!
Loved this chapter, even if there was no sex in it! =o)
Hugs, Z
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... now that was really... wow.
Squall is so cuddly when it comes to Zell and so... damn, I promised myself I would never admit this... so sexy when he's with Seifer. Ok, so I knew they'd get it together on that trip, and I can probably bet a couple of dollars that they'll repeat it at least two times before they come back. But if they do, you have to promise me that he'll do it back tll, ll, just as many times. That's my only condition. Who I am to make demands anyway? Sure, I can stop reading, but that would be like saying I would stop breathing. There's no way I'm leaving this half finished!
I'm truly addicted to this, so please grant me this one little wish. What ever happens, in the end or in your plot, let Zell get the credit. You know, like," I choose you Seifer, but no matter what you do, Zell will always be better", or something like that. Just let him get the credital? al?
Hugs, Z
Squall is so cuddly when it comes to Zell and so... damn, I promised myself I would never admit this... so sexy when he's with Seifer. Ok, so I knew they'd get it together on that trip, and I can probably bet a couple of dollars that they'll repeat it at least two times before they come back. But if they do, you have to promise me that he'll do it back tll, ll, just as many times. That's my only condition. Who I am to make demands anyway? Sure, I can stop reading, but that would be like saying I would stop breathing. There's no way I'm leaving this half finished!
I'm truly addicted to this, so please grant me this one little wish. What ever happens, in the end or in your plot, let Zell get the credit. You know, like," I choose you Seifer, but no matter what you do, Zell will always be better", or something like that. Just let him get the credital? al?
Hugs, Z
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zell opening the shower curtain with that smile...... *SQUEES*
Your Zell and Squall are too damn precious together.
Seifer!!!!!!!
OOOOOOOOOOO.. WHAT A PROMISE!!!!!!!!!
SWEET AND HOT = perfect chapter!!!!
Zell opening the shower curtain with that smile...... *SQUEES*
Your Zell and Squall are too damn precious together.
Seifer!!!!!!!
OOOOOOOOOOO.. WHAT A PROMISE!!!!!!!!!
SWEET AND HOT = perfect chapter!!!!
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, this was so damned hot. That whole ending scene was just orgasm-worthy (for them I mean. yeah) Awesome, awesome stuff. Now I'm like drooling over the prospect of Seifer's revenge. Maybe he'll do it in front of Rinoa? Just a thought, lol. Those two together are too hot for words. Update now! NoW NoW NoW!!!
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes, yessssssssssssssssssss! *doing the crazy dance* Ok, I didn't think that would happen for like a million years! At least not for a few chapters. But it was good, really, really good! It doesn't sound like I mean it without the cusses, but you'll just have to trust me, ok?
Hugs, Z
PS; and this was for ch. 5
Hugs, Z
PS; and this was for ch. 5
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I'm so sorry I haven't been reviewing or commenting in your journal -- I've been so busy with the end of school coming! *hugs*
As for the story and this chapter...
"He didn't want to hear anything else, didn't want to be the whiny bottom that cried every time he got fucked like his eyes were threatening to make him."
Wah. I love how you write Zell (hell, I love how you write them all, but Zell especially, people make him out different a lot of times and I have to say that I love yours the most). The line I quoted really tugged at my heart at how Zell is struggling with his own feelings for Squall. I thought he was going to cry and hoped he would, but I'm kinda glad he didn't at the same time, you know? It's just how some things fall and in this instance, I didn't really mind if it ended up looking a bit crooked. :) Crooked can be good. ;)
The threesome was very hot and it's very kinky how they fucked this time. *grin* Taking and being taking, I bet Squall liked that.
I can't wait to see what happens next in the story -- and I'll try to visit your journal soon and comment lots. ^^ *hugs*
As for the story and this chapter...
"He didn't want to hear anything else, didn't want to be the whiny bottom that cried every time he got fucked like his eyes were threatening to make him."
Wah. I love how you write Zell (hell, I love how you write them all, but Zell especially, people make him out different a lot of times and I have to say that I love yours the most). The line I quoted really tugged at my heart at how Zell is struggling with his own feelings for Squall. I thought he was going to cry and hoped he would, but I'm kinda glad he didn't at the same time, you know? It's just how some things fall and in this instance, I didn't really mind if it ended up looking a bit crooked. :) Crooked can be good. ;)
The threesome was very hot and it's very kinky how they fucked this time. *grin* Taking and being taking, I bet Squall liked that.
I can't wait to see what happens next in the story -- and I'll try to visit your journal soon and comment lots. ^^ *hugs*
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one down five to go? You mean there's more? Ack!! Well this part was great! You're trying to give me a heart. And the gag, omg, that was so hot! I could just picture Seifer holding that gag ... ooh, need to stop now. Great job coordinating everyone. I know that's the toughest part. But you wrote it very well and -- oh, yeah, I'll say it again: it was hot, hot, hot!!!