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Hot Damn!!!
I'm torn for Zell. He finally figured out that he did love Squall. *sigh*
I hope ZEll doesn't get hur hurt.. maybe Squall will stop fighting so hard and that'll help Zell some.

But... the smut was out of this world!!!!!!!!!!!
WAnted to faint when Squall asked to be gagged.

More, More, More, More!!!!!!!!!!

And.... Squall was soooo sweet to Zell at the end. Make me wanna cry.

Mmmm.... the net chapter holds alot of promise. *grins evilly*

I loved the interaction between Laguna and Squall!!!!

But, the best part was Seifer's golden line..... "If it involves you, it becomes my business."

Wheeeeeeeeee..... I love a possessive Seifer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More, more, more, more, more, more, more!!!!!!

See, I want to hurt you, but I can't because if you're maimed, you can't type. ARGH!!! Actually, I really enjoyed the phone conversation with Rinoa for some reason. That adds a neat little twist and ups the emotional stakes a bit so I found that interesting. As for the damned ending . . . I know you already know what I'm thinking. I'm not even going to say it.

No, I don't want to hit you, or kick you or hurt you in anyway for this chapter... Wait, I might wanna slap you though for putting Seifer and Squall together so that they can have some alone time. And, yes, I know they will. So, how weak is Squall? I know he can stand his ground with Zell, but that boy is just too adorable to do anything provocative, so if he did, maybe Squall would relent. But Seifer.... the man I truly love to hate. Seriously, that expression doesn't fit any other than Seifer. At least not for me.
Ok, rambling again. Loved it!


Hugs, Z

PS, How come I never say which chapter I'm reviewing? This is for chapter 4!

Holy . EV. EVIL! EVIL WOMAN! I gotta say I got a thrill out of Seifer noticing that Squall liked the threat of being tied down. Mmmm, naughty Seifer . . . I need the next chapter NOW. If you don't update this thing in like, a hour, I'm kicking your ass.

Okay, maybe not, but I'll be *really* upset with you.

Ahh, that was really nice.
You write all the boys perfectly!!!
Zell is way sweet!! And!!!!!!!!!! He's loved Squall for two years!!! *squees*

My favorite part was Zell ling ing at Seifer punching his bag.. you have some of the best visual's of *astory I've read.


More, More, More!!!!!!!

I'm so torn right now it freaks me out! Ok, yeah, I want Squall to be "normal", but like I said before, I don't like Seifer getting all the credit. Yes, I know, the guy's so full of himself he could probably blow up at any second, and every "good" that he does he needs to put it out of proportion, so he makes himself look like... Hyne? And yes, that was about Seifer. =o)
But Zell does alot of good too, it's just not as - how should I put this? - controversial as Seifer's.
Wonder what Squall would have done (or not done) if Zell hadn't been with them in the desert, or if he hadn't been "in love" with Squall? Maybe killed Seifer? Hm, that gave me something to think a.
Y.
Yeah, I'm waiting for the next chapter, but that kinda goes without saying, considering all this rambling I'm doing. Thanks for putting up with it!


Hugs, Z

Yep. That's what Squall needs. A big redecoration. And I'm not just talking about his apartment. He's got some serious rearranging to do up in his head (and heart).
Ok, so I know I'm supposed to read this because of the plot, and I have nothing to complain about there, but there's just a little somthing missing you know? There was so much sex in the first, that you kind of expect just as much, and if not more, in the second.
But that's alright though, it's probably just my hormones going bananas as usual.
Just for the record, my breakup after a year and a half (I was dumped though, might be different then) gave me alot of energy to write. You know, venting. Got a lot of frustration out and it caused me to break up the most great-fitting couple in the whole FF8 world. Weird thing is, my ex and I have made up, so I don't know if I can write Selphie's anger the way I should. So in my case, writing was my therapy.
Hope it works out for you though!
PS: sorry for sticking my nose where it doesn't belong, but I have this bad habit of "sharing".


Hugs, Z

Lol, I'm reading through each new reveal about Squall's new room and thinking, "He can have sex there, and there, and, oh yeah, there, too . . ."

Another great chapter as usual!

Awwwww, sweetie, *huggles you senseless*
I've been trying to catch you online.. if you need anything... I'm here.

Wonderful chapter and sexy bedroom but, the most amazing sentence in this chapter......

*********But the books weren't what Squall was looking at. His eyes were misting; he covered his mouth with one leather hand as he reached for a particular picture frame with the other. ***************

And, Seifer's soo damn sweet in this chapter, I hope Squall is kinda easy on him.
I can't wait for more but, I want you happy.
Love you.