rate_review Reviews

not that i really think my little review will matter in the grand scheme of things, but i'm doing it anyway. i just wanted to let you know i'm enjoying your story so far and i'm look forward to what is possibly to come. i don't have any real advice for your writing cause personally i think you're doing good. i don't have anything to critisize about cause again i think it's good. well that's all. if you decide to continue this story i'll be looking forward to it and keep reading it. and if you don't, well hey that's your choice and i can't stop you. but anyways i like it.

Great stuff. I like that way you have developed the plot and not simply delved inte moe most shady parts. ^_^ Keep it coming i'm gagging for a sequel.

Oh and funny comments on the start and finish xD

It was pretty good. I like this story update soon.