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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Back burner nothing!
This is perfect, you can't just drop it!
Not only is the plotline probably accurate (would the Great Sephiroth really be so careless as to let a 'monster' sleep only yards from him in the mansion? and would Vincent really join up just to kill Hojo with no thought for the man who was a part of his lost love?) but it is unbelievably well-written. And it hasn't even gotten anywhere yet!
PLEEEEEEEZE! Write more! Your style is enthralling and you manage to stick to the characters' personalities quite well.
And no, the first chapter wasn't too OOC. After it siin, in, the whole idea of Fate makes it all so right. Right, and in need of update!
If you are so craving reviews to write more, I'll find someone else to come to you and say these very same gs. gs. I mean it!
Love
//M
This is perfect, you can't just drop it!
Not only is the plotline probably accurate (would the Great Sephiroth really be so careless as to let a 'monster' sleep only yards from him in the mansion? and would Vincent really join up just to kill Hojo with no thought for the man who was a part of his lost love?) but it is unbelievably well-written. And it hasn't even gotten anywhere yet!
PLEEEEEEEZE! Write more! Your style is enthralling and you manage to stick to the characters' personalities quite well.
And no, the first chapter wasn't too OOC. After it siin, in, the whole idea of Fate makes it all so right. Right, and in need of update!
If you are so craving reviews to write more, I'll find someone else to come to you and say these very same gs. gs. I mean it!
Love
//M
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic; I can't believe that was your FIRST lemon. Well done. I loved loved just loved the detail.. it was awesome. Vincent is definately my favorite character from FFVII and you did a really good job with his thoughts, no complaints there. I encourage you to continue with this fic, though I like Harry Potter too.. so I can't exactly choose which one you should work on but I'm greedy and selfish so I say do both ^^. And also, so ynow,now, I'm making my way over to read your Harry Potter fic.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, it did take some time but hey....it took me a while to come and see if you updated. hey the story is great if you've already started that harry potter story i'm off to read that if its up :)
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was great. pleasxe write more! or more lemon scenes....^^
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my god that was youtr first lemon?? That's so good. And I love the pairing. I so envy you as another fanfic writer who can't write lemons for crap and has soooo much trouble with POV that it's not funny. Very good I love Vnt hnt he's so cool. And just for the record (because I'm a sucker for details) Sephiroth's eyecolor is green. Cloud's eyes are blue. Other than that that's one of the best fics Iv'e read for this pairing in a long time. (and I should know...It's my favorite pairing for ff7)
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Holy crap. That was nicely done. It was so well written...my Lord...0.0 I like. You should Continue...Unless you've already written other stories, and I'm just a late reader...^^ *claps* Well either way, it was beautiful!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your fic...it was glorious! thank you...I really needed that...I love you *glomps*
~Yuki~
~Yuki~
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
such a wonderful fanfic ^_^ Finally! a Seph/Vin fic I haven't read. Excellent job, especially because it's your first lemon. Coulda fooled me. You should definately continue. I don't think Sephiroth or Vin were OOC at all. Actually, this is probably the most IC I've ever seen them in a yaoi fic. =]