rate_review Reviews

okay.. i dont think you need to write better stories. the angst in this one is just fine! you just need to hone your writing skills and try not to get your own darkness get you down! when you write angsty stuff, you do a ghost dive into what pains you yourself ( i got a very distinct impression of that in chapter two) it is almost like you where possesed or something! this is a very good piece, just make ik work for you, and accept it instead of fighting it.

Nee! I've enjoyed the story very much so far, Sephy always was my favorite. ^-^ If it's not too much trouble, do you think you could email me next update?

Your free-style writing has some good thoughts, but I suggest a spell checker and grammar checker. Your errors get in the way of reading what otherwise might be an ok story.