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for After Party

by Nicolas

person Me
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, yeah, I'm looking for something.
person -----
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff.
person Iris
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hilarious dude! keep it up! ^.~
person You know me
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey man, awesome story, good work, should've stated it was a one shot though.
person Pissant
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude...this story fucking sucked...


I'm just messin. Your story was good...almost...too good? Anyway, you should write more, and post more onto here. Good job man, keep it up.


(Guessed who I am yet?)
person wwww
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Time for bed, after a little more "me time." ~.-
person Cwolf
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this and I hope you write more. The only thing is that the spacing is rather hard on the eyes. If you could separated the dialogue and paragraphs that might help. Anyway good work.
person CWolf
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Too Lazy to sign in) Anyway I really enjoyed this. Even though it was a one-shot I thought the characterizations were really good. It was hot, good work.