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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was... ok... it definitely wasn't that good, however. Language was weird, grammar bad, and that font change in the middle was weird. The summary made me laugh, though :)
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good..
kinda slightly unbelievable at some points but it was good..
anyway i write gay lemons and being a girl it's kinda impossible for me to have any first-hand experience in that area....
oh well it was good!
kinda slightly unbelievable at some points but it was good..
anyway i write gay lemons and being a girl it's kinda impossible for me to have any first-hand experience in that area....
oh well it was good!
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really funny. A very refreshing lemon considering that most are overly sappy. You might want to note the giant bold typing at the beginning, I'm not sure if some of that is an accident or not.
I, for one, would like a sequal.
I, for one, would like a sequal.
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ya, that was obviously under the influence of all the BAD lemons on here. You did weel keeping them in character until the actual sex scene, but that is not unforgivable. overall, a good effort
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
didn't you post it on ff.net (those guys really do delete the good stories) gj anyways keep up the good work