AFF Fiction Portal
person JockoMegane
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Out of all of your gang-bang stories, this is the best one. While I did enjoy the FF5 and 6 ones, there were some instances of familiar ground that this one did not have. Beyond that, all I can say is...elevate your sights away from the pedo-stuff in your other stories. It's not that difficult to keep the females at least teenagers, right?
person Kate
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...That ending was great...with meteor and whutnot.

I started giggling. :)
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm, i dont know if i like it or not. im not really into rape, but the end was allright. The part where meteor hit because they got too involved with their sex jobs and forgot to stop sephiroth was pretty funny.