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for Absolution I: Forsaken

by writeright

person Selena
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeek! I've read this a couple of times now and I love it!
Great Story... Angst and Suffering. Just the way I like it.
Please... Write moooo~re!
person Fishgirl
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Saw Reno, think he's better hanging out with Rude than this Mattie girl though. :)
person QueenAdreena
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Know you finished this a while ago, but thought i'd review to say i thoroughly enjoyed it. You're an excellent writer.
person Iron Dog
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this fic. Good portrail of a very angsty Seifer. I do hope you'll update/solve the mystery of "Does Seifer die or does Squall save his ass?" You do realize that its not fair to keep your readers in suspense to long, right?
person Lady Caos
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, YOU DID IT! *o*
I liked it, even if it was a little short. This ending is great, because every reader can imagine what will happen next.
This way, when I'm in my "Sad/Sadic Mode" I can imagine Seifer dyin', with Squall as last image in his eyes ( that's pretty cruel, more cruel than anything I've ever imagined) ...and when I'm in my " Life-is-good" mode, I can imagine the great Hyne saving him, Seifer conquering his love and all this fluffy stuff ( with some bondage hints ^_^).
By the way, it was really good...I'm sad that this is the end but "good things always have an ending".
You seem to be well informed about drugs- I liked it because it adds a realistic touch.
Hope to read something this great again ^_^
Lok
person tashabot
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I love this chapter. Dude, seriously, you're finally getting to the Squall/Seifer stuff. Yummy. *smirk* You're gonna keep us hanging, aren't you?
person PerfectOblivion3
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! such a sad ending though;_; By the way this is Sabrina^^ well i hope the followup will be just as good!(which of course it will be!~_^) Well ill see you around and MAKE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS!!!!!
person LadyCaos
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooow! I really loved this. I really love how you depict Seifer. I just couldn't believe that at the end of the game he returned to an everyday life so quickly, it just can't be. I thought he should be full of remorse and pain, like the Seifer you describe .And...that dream about Squall is just SOOO cool. I was drooling over my keyboard.
Please write the end soon...and let it be a sad, sad end ^_^ an happy ending would not suit with this. And, again, forgive me for my English.
Lok
person tashabot
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Swoot, new chapter! I liked it. Write more!
person ChibiMasochist
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello seifer! it's beautifully dark an' angsty. i especially liked the dream. usualy, i'm not super into yaoi, but this was veyr nicely done. i would, though, like to see seifer move on from the druggie town and pull a voy thing on squall. that would be hot.
sorry, i'm lettin gmy perversions take over again. but i do really like it.
Seifer- oh shut it. i might not even be gay
Cibi- oh like hell you arn't! have u looked at your self lately?
S- u are so anoying
C- and your a pansy

write more and i love you!