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for Absolution I: Forsaken

by writeright

person Dadella
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!
I really like this!!
It's fun, but really sad... I hope that Mattie gets what she deserves the *expletive deleted*
>^_^<
thanks for writing something so entertaining!!
person tashabot
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha, yeah, I was wondering if that was a Reno reference.....then I saw that at the bottom of the chapter when I reread it. Is he going to play a majorish part in the story? Cuz I love Reno.
person rita
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you're going to keep going with this right? it's sometimes hard to find good stories on this site, but i think this one's just great
person hopemia
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting is a compliment from me..... I'm enjoying the story so far... I want to see more soon!
person tashabot
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy both chapters, and I love them to death. You can write dysfunction better than I can (I have my own version of a fic like this, with drugs and shit, and it's not nearly as good :( ). I'm waiting for more. ^_^ But take your time, forcing it's never good.
person skiefury
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had actually skipped over this fic a few times, writing it off as just another Seifer-angst fanfic. But having read it, I totally didn't give it enough credit. It's very believable, well-written, and doesn't cut corners with either Seifer's character or what things might be like for him. As someone who's a sucker for happy endings, it's probably not a good fic for me to get into, but that doesn't stop me from being eager for the next chapter.
person hopemia
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... it took a little while for me et pet past the basic facts about Seifer.
I hope to see more from you.
person tashabot
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Keep it up.
person tashabot
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What drugs do you want to know about? My dad's a nurse and former drug addict, and I'd really like this fic to be continued. It looks like it might be really good.

As for weed, one thing you forgot is dry-mouth. ^_^ You get unbearably thirsty when you're stoned.

Any questions, email me at tashabot@gmail.com