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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a killer story. The whole Seph-Cloud-Zack thing has always been a firm favourite of mine. I admire your work. Keep it up, and try and do more fics soon.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow can't wait for more!!!
twisted and perversed, at the same time just can't help but devour line after line. hmmmm what is "the lab"??? cloud is submissive/machoist yet as the same time he holds power over the other two; much more engaging than traditional whimpering uke. can't wait to see what happens next! is it gonna be something to do with hojo?
twisted and perversed, at the same time just can't help but devour line after line. hmmmm what is "the lab"??? cloud is submissive/machoist yet as the same time he holds power over the other two; much more engaging than traditional whimpering uke. can't wait to see what happens next! is it gonna be something to do with hojo?
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Dirty man sex!!!! Gotta love it ^^ hehe...
Inspired? You bet I am.
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Inspired? You bet I am.
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting, and I love Cloud in drag! Please update more!
Lauren
Lauren
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh.
Holy.
Crap.
*speechless-ness*
DaYUM. That was quite the hot fic right there, mmhmm. Yup, sure was.
I think I'm gonna marry that fic. Yup, fo sho.
Hee, great job!!!
Holy.
Crap.
*speechless-ness*
DaYUM. That was quite the hot fic right there, mmhmm. Yup, sure was.
I think I'm gonna marry that fic. Yup, fo sho.
Hee, great job!!!
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Who doesn't love messy sex with cross dressing bishies?
Good job. Write more. Soon.
Good job. Write more. Soon.
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I'm reviewing again because it's just THAT good. There were a few typos in a few of the chapters. That's understandable because of your headache (Which I hope is better now ^^)
CH2 8th Paragraph "and he could let him see!" Was that suppose to be 'couldn't'?
CH2 11th Para: '“You go gonna like that, sweets?”'
CH4 22nd para: "Clouds pulled his head up"AnywAnyway, Cloud is just way too cute for words. Maybe there were times when he was way too nervous but hey, it works with your characterization of him :3
You also get major bonus points for having a Seph/Zack/Cloud with everything running pretty smoothy. <3
CH2 8th Paragraph "and he could let him see!" Was that suppose to be 'couldn't'?
CH2 11th Para: '“You go gonna like that, sweets?”'
CH4 22nd para: "Clouds pulled his head up"AnywAnyway, Cloud is just way too cute for words. Maybe there were times when he was way too nervous but hey, it works with your characterization of him :3
You also get major bonus points for having a Seph/Zack/Cloud with everything running pretty smoothy. <3
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. However, I find Cloud to be OOC. I’m so tired of how people much Cloud out to be this whiny little wimp. Cloud is strong character even if he thinks low about himself and continuous to struggle with himself. Don’t get me wrong I did like it. Just maybe don’t much Cloud out to be so wimpy and frighten. I’m sure he’d be nervous but not that bad. Too many people portray Cloud wrong.
Keep on written.
Kantia
Keep on written.
Kantia
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. I loved the image from the line: "He asked, tilting his head to the side as he followed the now pale blonde step for step into the living room." very much. Zack was written quite nicely. He wasn't portrayed as I usually perfer him, but you did a great job of writing him in your way. He's so wicked!
Please, write more XD
Please, write more XD
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grins, Very interesting so far very nice. Please update asap.