rate_review Reviews

Rofl. Me commenting on a long ago fic. Alright i'll just say. Im a little upset at the lack of Yuna here and the neglect of Rikku after Lulu's entrance. Could tell you were trying to give it a story but the sex are more important. Too many 69, imo but the last fivesome there was hot. That's all

My my my... so hot.

I feel I should apologize for my trollish review. You are a decent writer, and if you took your time and decribed things instead of plowing through, this story would be a worthwhile read.

Good Gods that was bad....And if you're going to write a story where the main female lead is gay, the least you could do is spell lesbian correctly and not compose it like a 14 year old male's jerk-off misconception of how lesbians act.

I just realised i've read this several times and not reviewed it for you ^_^
I like it alot. you really add some pre-tense in the first few chapters which makes the more erotic parts of this fiction all the more arousing. An excellent story to match, conquest of a love and suduction of a very pretty girl.
It's excellent, far better then anything i've written. I wish you luck in finding an artist to do a comic!

It's pretty good, but it feels like you could keep going. It just doesn't feel like the ending. If you're adding more then great. If you're decided to stop there then that's fine. Good writing.

While I'm not a big fan of authour characters in a already defined universe, I'm quite fond of this story. I don't know exactly why, actually.
Maybe because lesbian 69 "battles" are a fetish of mine? ^.^ 4/5