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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF man, this fic is almost impossible to understand, and it looks like you really don't even have that good of a concept of the game itself. It also looks kind of like you completely got the characters abilities confused just for the sake of some guy/guy lemon. Come on now, anything worth writing should at least be well written. It seems like you were so excited to finish it and get to certain key parts you overlooked the rest of the fic and put very little thought into it. A shame really.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo lemon!
lol is it actually possible to beat that chocobo eater?
and since when is Tidus a summoner?
you made him speak all retarded like Yuna in the game!
but oh well i liked it...
lol is it actually possible to beat that chocobo eater?
and since when is Tidus a summoner?
you made him speak all retarded like Yuna in the game!
but oh well i liked it...
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great! Please finish! -_-;
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is choppy, rushed, confusing, and not all that well written. I suggest taking it down, reading it over, and fixing the entire thing up.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude. This is like a mix of ripoffs of Kenji's stories.