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by Aphrael

person gothel
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heehee. that was awesome.:P
person lo
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy. I liked that a lot. Keep up the great work.

lo
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wait...that was your first lemon?! Dear Hyne, that was hot. Then again, I've become rather fond of a bound and gagged Squall, thanks to some RPing I've been doing and other fics I've been writing. Not swhatwhat else to say other than sappsappy ending seemed a bit off. Write more like this, please? *Makes puppy-dog face*

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person dancing-neko-chan
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*suffers from a nasal erruption and wipes the drool from her mouth*

I love SeiferXSquall pairings. this was great. Really good for a first time lemon!!!!
you should write a sequel or write one about ZellXSeifer(Zell as uke).

Real nice work! Keep writing!!!
person hopemia
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love a Dominate Seifer and a Submissive Squall!

One thing.. did you mean to say "wonton" or "wanton"?
person tashabot
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one. ^_^ It's very good for a first lemon, keep it up cuz I love this pairing.
person Tricia
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I thought it was excellent. It was extremelt ant and I really enjoyed Seifer's attitude. Squall's, too, now that I think of it. I do hope you write more lemons because you've got a talent for them :)