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by SpiritVampire

person Anon
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool story - good writing!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope yuna dies anyway and he gets with auron!
person Lengliorla
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story... I hope you write more
person Guild.Principal.Dio
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first part is really good: you had being capable to re-invent Seymour/Tidus pairing.
The others to part are not bad at all, but i've got the impression that your Tidus bitches around with everyone^^
After all, i've enjoyed it^^

(Sorry if my english sucks... i'm an italian fanfic writer and, even if i'm able to understand english easily, i'm not so good at writing it)
person opinion from a friend
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your write about chapter 3 my queen and the ending was amazing in sentiment

as always you manage to amaze and... excite ;) lol
person Mei
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I am really enjoying this fic! Hope to read more. Keep it up! ^^
person Riyoko
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! Yeah another SeymourxTidus and uh I think AuronxTidus right? ^^ i love it! Please update soon. Can't wait to read more!!