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very good i enjoyed it in all of its glory especially i know how poor cloud felt not with the whole crazy sex club but the sensations of loving extascy and then greatly hating it....very good story

I really enjoyed this story to tell you the truth. At first I was thinking it may be a little wacky but you made it work. I just wish you would write a sequel to this or something, not just leave it at that.
Hope to see more of your stuff
Good job n.n

So what ARE they gonna do to poor Cloud for taking that pill? And I must say that I <3 your fics hardcore! They're wonderful to say the least! ^_^

Ahhhhhh, poor Cloud-chan. *pat pat* I hate flamers! They are ober mean! I had my share. I loved it and hope you make another story. I love the pairing. And if flamers bother you, say flamers help the fire of the writing passion burn even more! BIATCH! haha. Have a nice day!

Eep, I think your story has put me off going to clubs for some time. But then again, I've never been to a club before (seriously, I have no social life). Bah, I'll be alright by this afternoon. And to your question (which I don't mind you asking), I like Night of the Scarecrow best because it's very sexy, but at the same time, quite cute. Cloud is so sweet and innocent, it's really nice. There's some plot, but not too much plot (Resurrection has plot as well. But it's so strange and Sephy-Comes-Alive is very overused...not saying it's bad, of course). Basically, it's sexy-smut, kawaii-smut, and good yaoi all rolled into one. And it's Hallowe'en, and EXTREMELY interesting time of the year (no weird double-meaning intended, btw).

Urgh, flames are so stupid. I read the flame, and I do think Cloud can be quite weak. In my opionion, he only acts really hard in at the beginning to cover up his insecureness. I would name an example, but my mind has gone blank and people would just correct me. Well, one thing's for sure: no one can be strong all the time. Besides, your story is PRE-GAME, so the flame doesn't count. ^_^ I think I've just bored you with this terribly long review, so I'll just shut up for now and bore you more when I review you Christmas story. Have a nice day!

Not only was I flamed in this fic, but also by what seems the same person twice! I must applaud their spelling corrections, but at the end of the paragraph could use some corrections.

== Anon
You need to grow the hell up. Seems you can't take a flame. This only proves you must be under age to be posting here. Anyone of an Adult age wouldn't whine and bitch posting thier flames in thier updates. Grow up ==


Perhaps what this person meant was “Anyone of adult age wouldn’t whine and bitch, posting their flames in their updates.” Although I am slightly stumped at the “whine and bitch posting their flames in their updates.” I have a feeling the grammar skipped at this point. Maybe they meant putting “whine and bitch ‘by’ posting their flames in their updates.” I have a feeling that is what they were trying to get across. By the way, very original name!

Again, Thanks for the comment.

You need to grow the hell up. Seems you can't take a flame. This only proves you must be under age to be posting here. Anyone of an Adult age wouldn't whine and bitch posting thier flames in thier updates. Grow up

Flaming is very immature o_o; Anyways, love the story so far! Poor Cloud, did the pill he take was it really serious? Is he going to be ill for very long? I think it's so sweet how Zack and Seph care about him X3 Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next review!

I love the activities you think up for the trio to do. Crossdressing is very good. Very.

And even though you don't need to be told this, pay no attention to Anonymouse because first of all, there is no 'E' in anonymous and second of all, there is more than one way a character can be interpreted and written when writing fanfiction. Also, if s/he didn't know, there were various displays of Cloud's succumb to Sephiroth if s/he had payed attention at all to the game while playing it. Does 'puppet' ring a bell? Cloud exhibit mental weakness various times. Not only that, but Cloud was not always the strong Hero guy he is presently. He couldn't even make it into SOLDIER back then, remember? Not to say Cloud is always this weak. But Anonymouse acts like he is always perfectly strong.

And I hope you take better care of yourself.

Yum . . . kinky sex club Cloud.

Please continue, it makes the smut fairy happy! ^_^