rate_review Reviews

*shakes head sadly*

I guess it's good if you enjoy juvenile attempts at screaming out of characterizations. Cloud, being abused? Crossdressing? Please...Where in the entire fucking game was Cloud ever so weak as to be abused by anyone? And a leather miniskirt? So goddamned highschool writing cliche it's choking.

Wish fulfillment. Why not just tack on original names, sweetheart. No one would be able to tell the characters if the names weren't there.

In my opinion, Zelda is very addictive (I'm thinking of the gameboy one, what was it called again? The one with the Windfish, it's on the tip of my tongue but I just can't remember. Link's Awakening, no? Well, good times all the same). I love your fics, I've been reading them for some time but I never got the time to review (I know, bad me). I like Night of the Scarecrow best but this story is interesting too. Still... I feel so sorry for poor Cloud *sniff*. Can Zack be gentle with him just for one chapter? Pleeeaaasseee? Never mind if he isn't. I hope you get better soon, have a nice day!!

I am sorry you are becomeing sick...
*hands you a cookie*
please feel better soon...ya knwo why? because you need to write more on this fic! this is a beautiful fic and I love it very much. Please write more, I wanna see what happens..

Hm, not bad. I do love the 'abused Cloud' vibe. Do you have any plans to add toys...? ^^

-Neptune